New reply from Susan Katz
<p>Many thanks for submitting your poem for consideration for next week's Featured Poem of the Week. I very much appreciate that English is not your first language but, in spite of that, you have written a poem that is powerful, passionate, purposeful, and heartfelt. I feel the emotion and the longing, the hope and the disappointment – and then, the resolution to move on and never let your heart suffer that kind of hurt again. Good job! Have a wonderfully creative day, Susan</p>
https://poetladykatz.com/poetry-talk/everytime
Original Post by mypoems126
EVERYTIME
<p>Everytime our eyes meet , </p>
<p>You tell me a story .</p>
<p>That story which was never told ,</p>
<p>And which makes love run down till my feet .</p>
<p> </p>
<p>Everytime I look into your eyes ,</p>
<p>You grant me with kindness .</p>
<p>Which makes me think ,</p>
<p>What would it be if you were mine ?</p>
<p> </p>
<p>Everytime we meet each other ,</p>
<p>My heart sinks in the ocean deep .</p>
<p>Which makes me think ,</p>
<p>What would it be if you always stayed by my side ?</p>
<p> </p>
<p>Everytime our hands touch so close ,</p>
<p>I feel the warmth of your skin still .</p>
<p>Which makes me think ,</p>
<p>What would it be if you never let me go ?</p>
<p> </p>
<p>Everytime we have words with each other ,</p>
<p>My lips keeps shuddering shy .</p>
<p>Which makes me think ,</p>
<p>What would it be if our souls kissed shamelessly ?</p>
<p> </p>
<p>Everytime we end up together ,</p>
<p>I solemnly wish for this while , to not end .</p>
<p>Which makes me think ,</p>
<p>What would it be if we were meant to be ?</p>
<p> </p>
<p> </p>
<p>And all I yearned for was a forever ,</p>
<p>But that was an eerie for the heavens in glee.</p>
<p>Shattered into pieces , it suddenly fell ,</p>
<p>My heart broke down , seeking answers for me .</p>
<p> </p>
<p>For all that was given , it's love ,</p>
<p>And maybe that heart of yours was never mine . </p>
<p>Also this one here , I have lost that too ,</p>
<p>But even in these times , I had our moments to confine .</p>
<p> </p>
<p> </p>
<p>This throbbing heart of mine stay ,</p>
<p>Getting lost into these gloaming thoughts of blue . </p>
<p>Sanguinely searching for a shimmer of your desire ,</p>
<p>My achy heart just waits , to be loved by you .</p>
<p> </p>
<p> </p>
<p>And now I knw , </p>
<p>To bow down when in need and To stand </p>
<p>up in every fall . </p>
<p>As my heart have realised , </p>
<p>What you gave me other than pain . </p>
<p>You gifted me the ecstasy of never ,</p>
<p>Being in melancholy again . </p>
<p> </p>
<p> </p>
<p> </p>
<p> </p>