New reply from Susan Katz
<p>There is so much, in your poem, that is so well thought out and well written, as well. The poem does have some issues with English grammar and would benefit from some editing. I am, however, impressed by the power and passion of your poem. Thank you so very much for sharing, Susan</p>
https://poetladykatz.com/poetry-talk/fade-away
Original Post by Akanksha
Fade away
<p>Shattered tree -"will <br />every leaf will leave me?"<br />Wishing for the waves <br />That will vanish in an eternity<br />With the waterfall<br />This intense gaze<br />Will be blur again<br />Like that drop of water<br />Which remained in glass<br />In void I will fade away.</p>
<p>- Akanksha Modi</p>
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