New reply from Susan Katz
<p>Thank you for sharing your work with me. I feel the emotion but I am "hearing" it – being told it – rather than having you show me, through imagery. "Nice" as what – an image for "hate" – an image for "tears rolling down your face"… You have all you need to create a very meaningful poem, just take the time to read a few contemporary poems and poets, and apply the techniques of poetry to your poem. I would be happy to see it again, after you have had a chance to work on it.</p>
https://poetladykatz.com/poetry-talk/glad-you-found-someone
Original Post by Akanksha
Glad: you found someone
<p>Yeah! I misunderstood that <br />You will be mine always<br />If you don't like me <br />Than why are you so nice to me<br />You know that i can't even resist it<br />Yeah! I misunderstood this<br />You only mean to me<br />But if you hate me<br />I am glad with it<br />You see my face<br />Even tears roll down on it<br />I will smile doesn't matter <br />Who you are in love with.</p>