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<p>Thank you for submitting your poem for consideration as Featured Poem of the Week. There is a wealth of feeling in this intense poem and I do thank you for sharing it with me. I wish you a happy and creative day, Susan</p>
https://poetladykatz.com/poetry-talk/i-remembered-that-evening-%e2%9c%a8
Original Post by Aiman.Baig_
I Remembered that Evening ✨
<p style="text-align: justify;">I remembered that evening when we were together,</p>
<p style="text-align: justify;">Even the sunset seemed a bit peculiar.</p>
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<p style="text-align: justify;">You raised your hand and kept on mine,</p>
<p style="text-align: justify;">Gradually, the stars emerged and shined.</p>
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<p style="text-align: justify;">It seemed as though every chamber in your heart was taciturn for me ,</p>
<p style="text-align: justify;">Your lethiferous appearance attracted me .</p>
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<p style="text-align: justify;">That evening your eyes were the one staring me,</p>
<p style="text-align: justify;">Your amiable look towards me which I could see.</p>
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<p style="text-align: justify;">My cheeks became refescent, I began to feel shy,</p>
<p style="text-align: justify;">The moment you started the conversation and said "Hi".</p>
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<p style="text-align: justify;">The firmament began to fade its brightness,</p>
<p style="text-align: justify;">The breeze began to spread its coolness.</p>
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<p style="text-align: justify;">I knew I was loquacious,</p>
<p style="text-align: justify;">but your presence made me speechless.</p>
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<p style="text-align: justify;">Our conversation began,</p>
<p style="text-align: justify;">Things were moving with celerity until ichor gushed out from your organ.</p>
<p style="text-align: justify;"> </p>
<p style="text-align: justify;">I screeched seeing your wound,</p>
<p style="text-align: justify;">suddenly you fell on the ground.</p>
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<p style="text-align: justify;">Tears were rolling down my eyes,</p>
<p style="text-align: justify;">because you were important to me than other lives.</p>
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<p style="text-align: justify;">I remember the last words before your demise,"WE WILL COALESCE ONE DAY".,</p>
<p style="text-align: center;">And your soul was parted with my dreams from this world which I remember till today🥀</p>
<p>:Aiman.Baig_</p>
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