New reply from Susan Katz
<p>Very nice – concise and meaningful. I'm a little confused, however, by your last line – "…when pen divulges the paper." I'm not sure "divulge" is the right word. "Deluge" meaning to "flood" the paper might be more appropriate. Just a thought. Thank you so very much for sharing your work with me. Your friend in poetry, Susan</p>
https://poetladykatz.com/poetry-talk/journal
Original Post by Aaliya Akhun
Journal
<p style="text-align: justify;"><em><strong>When I write, <br />My hands fall short,</strong></em></p>
<p><strong><em>Of the suppressed emotions,</em></strong></p>
<p><strong><em>I let out, </em></strong></p>
<p><strong><em>The moment catharsis occurs,</em></strong></p>
<p><strong><em>Is the minute when pen divulges the paper.</em></strong></p>
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