New reply from Susan Katz
<p>I very much like your use of alliteration – I think it works well. I sense a touch of classical poetry influence in your writing. Well done! Thank you so much for sharing with me. I will be featuring your poem, in the next few days, on my Instagram page. Your friend in poetry, Susan</p>
https://poetladykatz.com/poetry-talk/loneliness
Original Post by ravenclaw
LONELINESS
<p style="text-align: center;"><span style="font-size: 1.4em;">Once upon a midnight melancholy</span></p>
<p style="text-align: center;">The joyousness laughed<br />I crave the mournful, maudlin melody</p>