New reply from Susan Katz
<p>Well done. Short, crisp and to the point and, poetic. I am delighted you shared your work with me and will be featuring it in a poetladykatz Instagram post in the next week or so. Keep on writing! – Susan</p>
https://poetladykatz.com/poetry-talk/pain
Original Post by Seema Dinesh
Pain
<p>When the dark clouds,</p>
<p>Rushed with pelting rain,</p>
<p>A foolish thought just,</p>
<p>Crossed my mind,</p>
<p>That it might end,</p>
<p>My invincible pain.</p>
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