Poet Lady Katz: new forum reply to Then it will be morning

New reply from Susan Katz

<p>Thank you so much for submitting your poem to be considered as possible Featured Poem of the Week.  I was particularly impressed by your use of repetition and the lovely rhythms that created.  You have some very strong and powerful lines, and some very soft and touching lines – all in all – a really good job.  Wishing you a very happy and productive day, Susan</p>

https://poetladykatz.com/poetry-talk/then-it-will-be-morning

Original Post by Neha Rani

Then it will be morning

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<p dir="auto">There is dense darkness all around,<br />Black thick night has surrounded<br />Burn the lamp of hope,<br />Do not get so angry with yourself,<br />Rays of light will come from the horizon,<br />No matter how big the night is,<br />One day it will fall,<br />Then it will be morning.</p>
<p dir="auto">The thick circles of despair have surrounded<br />There is no hope, no strength,<br />Burn the lamp of knowledge,<br />Do not get so angry with yourself,<br />The sun will come out of the clouds,<br />No matter how big the night is,<br />One day it will fall,<br />Then it will be morning.</p>
<p dir="auto">Loneliness is only in these paths,<br />Have to walk on the path of thorns,<br />Make yourself strong,<br />Do not get so angry with yourself,<br />Even a thorn becoming a flower,<br />Will blossom one day,<br />No matter how big the night is,<br />One day it will fall,<br />Then it will be morning.</p>