Poet Lady Katz: new forum reply to What this World is Like !

New reply from Susan Katz

<p>Thank you for sharing your philosophical poem with me.  I very much like the tone of your poem, but fear there are some issues with translation into English.  Some of the lines tend to be confusing and do not really say what I believe you are intending.  However, your image of life being like "roses red" is really quite nice and I do so appreciate the emotion and energy that went in to creating your poem.  Your friend in poetry, Susan</p>


Original Post by Sanmeet Kaur Sarna

What this World is Like !

<p style="text-align: left;">This world is like the roses red</p>
<p style="text-align: left;">So beautiful indeed !</p>
<p style="text-align: left;">Yet the thorns thy pricked our soul</p>
<p style="text-align: left;">Won't suffocate but lead.</p>
<p style="text-align: left;">Lessons have been hard to learn</p>
<p style="text-align: left;">But those who don't they bleed</p>
<p style="text-align: left;">Life is like a movie that teach us all to breathe.</p>
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<p>This world is like the roses red</p>
<p>So wonderful indeed !</p>
<p>Yet it's hard to realize</p>
<p>When greed has tipped us each.</p>
<p>Stories have a moral end</p>
<p>But those who don't, agreed</p>
<p>They still teach us to differentiate and finally proceed.</p>
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<p>This world is like the roses red</p>
<p>So mysterious indeed!</p>
<p>Yet the fact that truth's bitter</p>
<p>We prefer what is sweet.</p>
<p>Lies never walk along</p>
<p>But betray, believe</p>
<p>Though hard still it's good for us, never learn to cheat.</p>
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