Poet Lady Katz: new forum reply to you're

New reply from Susan Katz

<p>This is a very "tasty" poem!  Some very fine images and some "delicious" ones too.  There are some truly lovely images here – I think your last stanza, starting with "embracing the space between us…" was very fine writing.  Thank you for sharing your work with me.  – Susan</p>


Original Post by Riya Jaiswal


<p>// 𝒚𝒐𝒖'𝒓𝒆 𝒕𝒉𝒓𝒆𝒆 𝒍𝒂𝒚𝒆𝒓𝒆𝒅 𝒄𝒖𝒑𝒄𝒂𝒌𝒆</p>
<p>𝒊𝒄𝒚 𝒘𝒉𝒊𝒑𝒑𝒆𝒅 𝒐𝒏 𝒎𝒚 𝒇𝒊𝒏𝒈𝒆𝒓𝒕𝒊𝒑𝒔</p>
<p>𝒅𝒖𝒈 𝒊𝒏𝒕𝒐 𝒚𝒐𝒖𝒓 𝒃𝒂𝒓𝒆 𝒎𝒊𝒍𝒌𝒚 𝒔𝒌𝒊𝒏</p>
<p>𝒅𝒊𝒔𝒔𝒐𝒍𝒗𝒊𝒏𝒈 𝒃𝒆𝒇𝒐𝒓𝒆 𝒊 𝒄𝒂𝒏</p>
<p>𝒕𝒂𝒔𝒕𝒆 𝒆𝒏𝒐𝒖𝒈𝒉 𝒐𝒇 𝒚𝒐𝒖 𝒕𝒐 𝒓𝒆𝒎𝒊𝒏𝒊𝒔𝒄𝒆𝒏𝒄𝒆</p>
<p> </p>
<p>𝒚𝒐𝒖'𝒓𝒆 𝒔𝒕𝒓𝒂𝒘𝒃𝒆𝒓𝒓𝒚 𝒅𝒊𝒑𝒑𝒆𝒅 𝒊𝒏 𝒉𝒐𝒏𝒆𝒚</p>
<p>𝒅𝒓𝒐𝒐𝒍𝒊𝒏𝒈 𝒇𝒓𝒐𝒎 𝒕𝒉𝒆 𝒄𝒓𝒆𝒂𝒔𝒆 𝒐𝒇</p>
<p>𝒎𝒚 𝒔𝒎𝒊𝒍𝒆 𝒅𝒐𝒘𝒏 𝒎𝒚 𝒄𝒉𝒊𝒏 </p>
<p>𝒔𝒂𝒊𝒍𝒊𝒏𝒈 𝒂𝒄𝒓𝒐𝒔𝒔 𝒕𝒉𝒆 𝒄𝒍𝒂𝒗𝒊𝒄𝒍𝒆 </p>
<p>𝒌𝒊𝒔𝒔𝒊𝒏𝒈 𝒆𝒗𝒆𝒓𝒚 𝒊𝒏𝒄𝒉 𝒐𝒇 𝒎𝒚 𝒃𝒐𝒔𝒔𝒐𝒎 </p>
<p>𝒂𝒔 𝒊 𝒔𝒕𝒆𝒂𝒍 𝒂 𝒃𝒊𝒕𝒆 𝒐𝒇 𝒚𝒐𝒖 </p>
<p>𝒂𝒍𝒍 𝒇𝒍𝒖𝒔𝒉𝒆𝒅  𝒉𝒖𝒔𝒉𝒆𝒅  𝒂𝒏𝒅 𝒈𝒐𝒐𝒔𝒆𝒃𝒖𝒎𝒑𝒆𝒅 </p>
<p> </p>
<p>𝒚𝒐𝒖'𝒓𝒆 𝒍𝒖𝒔𝒄𝒊𝒐𝒖𝒔 𝒃𝒍𝒖𝒆𝒃𝒆𝒓𝒓𝒊𝒆𝒔 𝒐𝒏 </p>
<p>𝒉𝒆𝒂𝒓𝒕 𝒔𝒉𝒂𝒑𝒆𝒅  𝒎𝒂𝒑𝒍𝒆 𝒄𝒐𝒂𝒕𝒆𝒅 𝒑𝒂𝒏𝒄𝒂𝒌𝒆𝒔 </p>
<p>𝒊𝒏𝒕𝒆𝒏𝒕𝒍𝒚 𝒘𝒂𝒊𝒕𝒊𝒏𝒈 𝒐𝒏 𝒐𝒖𝒓 </p>
<p>𝒃𝒓𝒆𝒂𝒌𝒇𝒂𝒔𝒕 𝒕𝒂𝒃𝒍𝒆 𝒕𝒐 𝒃𝒆 𝒈𝒐𝒃𝒃𝒍𝒆𝒅 </p>
<p>𝒂𝒔 𝒊 𝒃𝒓𝒆𝒂𝒕𝒉𝒆 𝒚𝒐𝒖𝒓 𝒂𝒎𝒃𝒓𝒐𝒊𝒔𝒂𝒍  𝒔𝒂𝒗𝒐𝒖𝒓𝒚 𝒃𝒓𝒆𝒂𝒕𝒉 </p>
<p>𝒘𝒉𝒊𝒍𝒆 𝒔𝒊𝒑𝒑𝒊𝒏𝒈 𝒇𝒓𝒆𝒔𝒉𝒍𝒚 𝒃𝒓𝒆𝒘𝒆𝒅 </p>
<p>𝒏𝒖𝒕𝒕𝒚 𝒄𝒐𝒇𝒇𝒆𝒆 𝒐𝒏 𝒎𝒊𝒔𝒕𝒚 𝒎𝒐𝒓𝒏𝒊𝒏𝒈𝒔 </p>
<p>𝒍𝒊𝒄𝒌𝒊𝒏𝒈 𝒂𝒘𝒂𝒚 𝒕𝒉𝒆 𝒓𝒆𝒎𝒂𝒊𝒏𝒊𝒏𝒈𝒔 𝒐𝒇 𝒚𝒐𝒖 </p>
<p>𝒇𝒓𝒐𝒎 𝒘𝒉𝒊𝒕𝒆 𝒎𝒂𝒓𝒃𝒍𝒆𝒅 𝒑𝒍𝒂𝒕𝒆 </p>
<p>𝒂𝒔 𝒚𝒐𝒖 𝒍𝒆𝒂𝒗𝒆 𝒃𝒆𝒉𝒊𝒏𝒅 𝒕𝒉𝒆</p>
<p>𝒕𝒊𝒑 𝒐𝒇 𝒎𝒚 𝒇𝒓𝒐𝒛𝒆𝒏 𝒏𝒐𝒔𝒆- 𝒍𝒐𝒗𝒆 𝒃𝒊𝒕</p>
<p> </p>
<p>𝒚𝒐𝒖'𝒓𝒆 𝒄𝒊𝒏𝒏𝒂𝒎𝒐𝒏 𝒔𝒕𝒊𝒄𝒌</p>
<p>𝒊 𝒇𝒍𝒊𝒄𝒌 𝒃𝒆𝒕𝒘𝒆𝒆𝒏 𝒎𝒚 𝒕𝒆𝒆𝒕𝒉 </p>
<p>𝒔𝒍𝒖𝒓𝒑𝒊𝒏𝒈 𝒊𝒏 𝒚𝒐𝒖𝒓 𝒔𝒐𝒖𝒍 </p>
<p>𝒍𝒊𝒌𝒆 𝒆𝒙𝒐𝒕𝒊𝒄 𝒍𝒂𝒗𝒆𝒏𝒅𝒆𝒓 𝒍𝒆𝒎𝒐𝒏𝒂𝒅𝒆</p>
<p>𝒅𝒆𝒗𝒐𝒖𝒓𝒊𝒏𝒈 𝒕𝒉𝒆 𝒕𝒉𝒊𝒓𝒔𝒕 𝒐𝒇 𝒎𝒚 𝒕𝒉𝒓𝒐𝒂𝒕</p>
<p>𝒐𝒏 𝒍𝒂𝒛𝒚 𝒔𝒖𝒎𝒎𝒆𝒓 𝒏𝒐𝒐𝒏𝒔 </p>
<p>𝒆𝒙𝒉𝒂𝒍𝒊𝒏𝒈 𝒆𝒄𝒔𝒕𝒂𝒔𝒚 </p>
<p>𝒎𝒐𝒊𝒔𝒕𝒆𝒏𝒊𝒏𝒈 𝒕𝒉𝒆 𝒈𝒂𝒑𝒔 </p>
<p>𝒊𝒏 𝒎𝒚 𝒑𝒂𝒓𝒄𝒉𝒆𝒅 𝒍𝒊𝒑𝒔 </p>
<p>𝒄𝒐𝒍𝒍𝒚𝒘𝒐𝒃𝒃𝒍𝒆𝒔 𝒅𝒂𝒏𝒄𝒊𝒏𝒈 </p>
<p>𝒐𝒏 𝒕𝒉𝒆 𝒓𝒉𝒚𝒕𝒉𝒎 𝒐𝒇 𝒐𝒖𝒓 𝒉𝒆𝒂𝒓𝒕𝒃𝒆𝒂𝒕𝒔 </p>
<p> </p>
<p>𝒚𝒐𝒖'𝒓𝒆 𝒃𝒖𝒕𝒕𝒆𝒓𝒚 𝒂𝒗𝒂𝒄𝒂𝒅𝒐 𝒐𝒏 𝒎𝒚 𝒕𝒐𝒂𝒔𝒕</p>
<p>𝒚𝒐𝒖𝒓 𝒘𝒂𝒓𝒎𝒕𝒉 𝒔𝒘𝒂𝒍𝒍𝒐𝒘𝒔 𝒎𝒆 </p>
<p>𝒊𝒏 𝒈𝒓𝒆𝒚 𝒅𝒆𝒄𝒆𝒎𝒃𝒆𝒓𝒔 </p>
<p>𝒍𝒊𝒌𝒆 𝒎𝒖𝒔𝒉𝒚 𝒎𝒂𝒓𝒔𝒉𝒎𝒂𝒍𝒍𝒐𝒘𝒔</p>
<p>𝒊 𝒕𝒐𝒂𝒔𝒕 𝒊𝒏 𝒄𝒉𝒓𝒊𝒔𝒕𝒎𝒂𝒔 𝒃𝒐𝒏𝒇𝒊𝒓𝒆 </p>
<p>𝒔𝒊𝒏𝒈𝒊𝒏𝒈 𝒄𝒂𝒓𝒐𝒍𝒊𝒏𝒈𝒔</p>
<p>𝒃𝒂𝒌𝒊𝒏𝒈 𝒏𝒐𝒔𝒕𝒂𝒍𝒈𝒊𝒂 𝒔𝒘𝒆𝒆𝒕𝒆𝒏𝒆𝒅 </p>
<p>𝒄𝒉𝒐𝒄𝒐 𝒄𝒉𝒊𝒑 𝒎𝒖𝒇𝒇𝒊𝒏𝒔</p>
<p>'𝒂𝒂𝒓𝒛𝒖' 𝒇𝒆𝒓𝒎𝒆𝒏𝒕𝒆𝒅 𝒂𝒑𝒑𝒍𝒆 𝒑𝒊𝒆𝒔 </p>
<p> </p>
<p>𝒚𝒐𝒖'𝒓𝒆 𝒑𝒆𝒂𝒏𝒖𝒕 𝒃𝒖𝒕𝒕𝒆𝒓</p>
<p>𝒊 𝒔𝒑𝒓𝒆𝒂𝒅 𝒂𝒍𝒍 𝒐𝒗𝒆𝒓 𝒎𝒆</p>
<p>𝒆𝒎𝒃𝒓𝒂𝒄𝒊𝒏𝒈 𝒕𝒉𝒆 𝒔𝒑𝒂𝒄𝒆 𝒃𝒆𝒕𝒘𝒆𝒆𝒏 𝒖𝒔 </p>
<p>𝒐𝒖𝒓 𝒂𝒕𝒐𝒎𝒔 𝒄𝒐𝒍𝒍𝒊𝒅𝒊𝒏𝒈 𝒊𝒏𝒕𝒐 𝒔𝒕𝒂𝒓𝒅𝒖𝒔𝒕𝒔 </p>
<p>𝒇𝒐𝒓 𝒘𝒉𝒆𝒏 𝒚𝒐𝒖 𝒕𝒐𝒖𝒄𝒉 𝒎𝒆- 𝒂 𝒎𝒐𝒐𝒏 𝒓𝒊𝒔𝒆𝒔 </p>
<p>𝒐𝒉! 𝒚𝒐𝒖'𝒗𝒆 𝒂𝒍𝒘𝒂𝒚𝒔 𝒃𝒆𝒆𝒏 𝒎𝒚 𝒔𝒖𝒏𝒔𝒆𝒕. //</p>