Reply To: FLOWER VASE

[Susan Katz]

Thank you for sharing your work with me.  There are some lovely moments in your poem, but I believe you may have some difficulty with the grammatical rules of English, such as tenses.  Take some time to go over your poem and see if you can tighten and clarify it, by changing, adding, or deleting some words/phrases to give it a more meaningful translation into English.  I do think you will have a delightful “word picture” poem here after you’ve spent some time, as all poets must, editing.  Your friend in poetry, Susan