Reply To: Adorable adventure (success)

[Susan Katz]

What a happy, upbeat, and positive poem you’ve written.  Using Robert Frost’s line from his poem, The Road Less Traveled, was a nice touch.  And that rhyme, right there at the end, really works.  Your poem could benefit from grammatical corrections but, I do thank you so very much for sharing it with me.  I always enjoy a “success” story, in poetic form.  Your friend in poetry, Susan