Adorable adventure (success)

[thejassleenkaur]

An adorable adventure of my life was …

One of the unpredictable story of my life . .

The road of my life was full of obstacles and circumstances. .

I got a path that was full of new chances…

A new beginning of the life was started …

 I got a potential ..to be independent and kind-hearted 

Suddenly the path diverged into new paths 

By closing my eyes and taking a deep breath ,,,I decided to choose the path that was travelled less

And the result was  ….I got SUCCESS….

This belongs to everyone because everyone has to face many obstacles to get success and I am one of them but always remember one thing only HARDWORK leads to success….

[Susan Katz]

What a happy, upbeat, and positive poem you’ve written.  Using Robert Frost’s line from his poem, The Road Less Traveled, was a nice touch.  And that rhyme, right there at the end, really works.  Your poem could benefit from grammatical corrections but, I do thank you so very much for sharing it with me.  I always enjoy a “success” story, in poetic form.  Your friend in poetry, Susan

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