Reply To: Your eyes

[Susan Katz]

Thank you for submitting your poem.  I like the tone of your poem and the suggestiveness of it.  Grammatically, I believe, in the last line “is” would work better than “has.”  You have a good sense of the rhythm of poetry and the need for emotional commitment to your words and thoughts.  I would be happy to consider your poem, after editing, to be featured on my Instagram page.  Your friend in poetry, Susan