Reply To: For moments to come…

[Susan Katz]

Thank you so much for submitting your “anticipation” poem for consideration to be featured on my https://www.poetladykatz.com website.  You have some very good lines and some powerful emotions.  Your poem does need some editing when it comes to meaningful and appropriate English grammar.  Also, I would, if I may, suggest that you “tighten your poem.” 

Example – “Flowers deck the radiant moon / arms open wide / as eternal blue skies / greeting clouds/ brushed with gloom…”

You definitely have the skill of the poet and a wonderful grasp of the meaning and power of imagery.  With some work, I would definitely consider featuring your poem.

I thank you again for submitting your work and look forward to rereading, if and when you choose to resubmit.  Your friend in poetry, Susan