Reply To: Womb of mortification

[Susan Katz]

Outstanding poem!  You have maintained the message and the emotional meaning of the poem throughout and you have done so with outstanding imagery,  Some memorable lines:

Even the air remembers how he held me wrong,

coiled like worms that dream of wings.

Mirrors break their gaze on me,

– and many other lines, combinations of words – you have a truly memorable poem here and one that deserves to be read.  Do you have a platform you can share it on?

You are a gifted poet.  Thank you for sharing your work with me, 

Susan