Home Forums Poetry Talk 3 AM

Viewing 2 posts - 1 through 2 (of 2 total)
  • Author
    Posts
  • #17878
    Abditory_Hunter
    Participant

    Smoke in my brain,

            Nicotine in my veins,

            Someone please restrain me,

            My demons are driving me insane.

    #18516
    Susan Katz
    Keymaster

    Now that’s telling it like it is – strong and to the point.  I would have liked to have seen some imagery for “Nicotine in my veins” or “Smoke in my brain” but I do like the power and intensity of it and will feature it on my poetladykatz Instagram page in the next couple of weeks.  Thank you so much for sharing your work with me, Susan

Viewing 2 posts - 1 through 2 (of 2 total)
  • You must be logged in to reply to this topic.