Thank you for sharing this very intimate and loving poem with me. It is a bit longer than what I am able to feature on my Instagram page, for this submission request period. Also, I would like to suggest that perhaps, trying so hard to rhyme may detract from the real emotion you are trying to express. Poetry does not always need to rhyme but it does always, need to make us feel! Find a way to express what you are feeling through the magic and power of imagery (metaphor and simile.) Your friend in poetry, Susan
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