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    Fathima.J6
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    And as he ran past 

    Even time stood still,

    Perplexed. 

     

    He was beyond sight,

    And time still crawling, 

    Struggled out of the hole, 

    the hole my mind dug deep for it.

     

    My sorrows weren’t all mine, 

    Some his,

    Some mine, 

    Some of a time which 

    Isn’t mine anymore 

     

    I lay plundered,

    Of love

    Of warmth 

    Of all that was given.

     

    I lay forever now,

    In the hole,

    That even time left vacant. 

    #18353
    Fathima.J6
    Participant

    I love your blog. It’s so wonderful and filled with such beautiful poetry. 

    #18369
    Susan Katz
    Keymaster

    Thank you so much for your good words and, your fine poem. You have a true sense of poetic flow, with some fine images and impressive line break. I will add it the poems I am considering for Featured Poem of the Month for June. I am happy we share a similar passion for poetry. – Susan

    #18370
    Fathima.J6
    Participant

    Thank you. So glad to be part of this. ❤️

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