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    Being_oasis
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    I was like a speck of dust,

    In this vast old universe

    Would have been left all alone,

     In the dungeons of Howling Souls

    Until she showed up as an angel,

    Sent by my first love

    And brought me up,

    Yes! She brought me up.

     

    As time seemed to pass by,

    Like the calm breeze in the sky,

    I forgot ‘bout her tender love,

    And turned towards worldly lusts

    But then she showed up as a Saviour,

    Sent by my first love.

    And straightened my,

    crooked path

     

    I was always dispirited,

    And pondered ‘bout future bread

    Until she showed up as my Mother,

    Sent by my Loving Lord

    And lifted up,

    My forlorn soul

     

    I am writing this piece of love,

    With tears running down my eyes

    I don’t know what would’ve been of me

    If you hadn’t been,

    Half of me.

     

    My thoughts are acting like a dagger,

     With the brain being an open wound,

    It’s’ asking what would you be,

    When your third love, would meet the first?

    What will be your state of mind?

    When the guiding moon will not be there to shine

     

    With the ring of questions constricting,

    My Heart trembled, body shuddered.

    Then the Glorious one guided me,

    To never leave his righteous way,

    To remember his good Slave’s life

    And live this life for the other world.

     

     

    by:- Mohammad Owais

    #18452
    Susan Katz
    Keymaster

    What a very personal and introspective poem you have shared with me.  I thank you for submitting it to be considered for Featured Poem of the Month for July.  You have put a great deal of yourself and your emotional life into this poem and I thank you so very much for sharing it with me.  I will be announcing my decision the last week of June.  – Susan

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