Shattering tree -“will every leaf will leave me?” Wishing for the waves That will last an eternity With the waterfall This intense gaze Will be blur again Like that drop of water Which remained in glass In void I will fade away.
There is so much, in your poem, that is so well thought out and well written, as well. The poem does have some issues with English grammar and would benefit from some editing. I am, however, impressed by the power and passion of your poem. Thank you so very much for sharing, Susan
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