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    DavidWeaklinks
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    Yesterday I wished I had wings,
    To take me on a path to bliss,
    Hunting a serene glee of the trees,
    Losing feathers, chasing dreams.

    Glee of the trees as they fill,
    Birds, flowers and bees until,
    Kindness mounts up a hill,
    My heart that’s otherwise evil.

    And then I’d board that yacht,
    At that new shore, now a dot,
    Across waves and tides I’ll trot,
    Far, far away, is my hide-out.

    Where Sun slept a wild darkness,
    Where moon left a drowsy mess,
    The cotton clouds knew even less,
    Where their lost rains progress.

    Let my birds here sing around,
    And the bees buzz about,
    Beyond sand and time I’ll trot,
    Far, far away is my hide out.

    I’ll wake up to a golden Lyre,
    As I adorn it’s notes, I desire,
    Trusted hands that never tire,
    Mystic ones I’d hire to inspire.

    My inner thoughts are out loud,
    A land full of hope! So I thought,
    Past alley-ways and valleys I’ll trot,
    Far, farther away, is my hide out.

     

    #18400
    Susan Katz
    Keymaster

    You have some very lovely lines and fine images in your poem “Far Far Away” and I thank you for sharing it with me.  I will add it to the many poems I’ve received and will be considering for Featured Poem of the Month for June. 
    All best, Susan

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