Her's and Mine

[notutkarsh_]

 

 

She is awake thinking about me ,
I am asleep dreaming about her .

And somewhere between her thoughts and my dreams
we collide .

Her thoughts become mine, my dreams become her’s .

They materialize and come into being ,
in the midst of our conscience .

Where we lie together
in our far yet too close proximity.

Inside our own small universe
that even science couldn’t decipher.

That’s where we exist.

@notutkarsh_

[Susan Katz]

Thank you so much for sharing this very lovely poem with me.  I love the contrasts you introduce and how they play off of one another.  I will add your poem to the others I am considering for Featured Poem of the Month for June.  I will be announcing the winner on Friday, May 28th in my newsletter.  You have talent and I hope you keep writing, Susan

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