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    Aiman.Baig_
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    I remembered that evening when we were together,

    Even the sunset seemed a bit peculiar.

     

    You raised your hand and kept on mine,

    Gradually, the stars emerged and shined.

     

    It seemed as though every chamber in your heart was taciturn for me ,

    Your lethiferous appearance attracted me .

     

    That evening your eyes were the one staring me,

    Your amiable look towards me which I could see.

     

    My cheeks became refescent, I began to feel shy,

    The moment you started the conversation and said “Hi”.

     

    The firmament began to fade its brightness,

    The breeze began to spread its coolness.

     

    I knew I was loquacious,

    but your presence made me speechless.

     

    Our conversation began,

    Things were moving with celerity until ichor gushed out from your organ.

     

    I screeched seeing your wound,

    suddenly you fell on the ground.

     

    Tears were rolling down my eyes,

    because you were important to me than other lives.

     

    I remember the last words before your demise,”WE WILL COALESCE ONE DAY”.,

    And your soul was parted with my dreams from this world which I remember till today🥀

    :Aiman.Baig_

     

    #18258
    Susan Katz
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    Thank you for submitting your poem for consideration as Featured Poem of the Week.  There is a wealth of feeling in this intense poem and I do thank you for sharing it with me.  I wish you a happy and creative day, Susan

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