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    thoseuntoldtales
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    I know I’m down,
    Don’t worry; I won’t frown!
    I know I am broken;
    My patience has been stolen!
    The walls of my room have heard my silent screams,
    Broken are my dreams!
    The Moonlight has seen tears rolling down my cheeks;
    I have already seen many tricks!
    My pillow knows my anxiety,
    I wanna isolate from this reality! 

    #18432
    Susan Katz
    Keymaster

    I appreciate you sharing this very personal poem with me.  I can sense your intensity and emotional commitment to your writing and that is the fist step towards becoming a true poet.  The poem also seems to come directly from your heart.  – Susan

    #18455
    Zaina I K
    Participant

    "Great piece. The following lines struck me: My pillow knows my anxiety, I wanna isolate from this reality! "

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