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    nasthoughts
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    Your soul keeps lurking

    So then what about me?

    I can feel the earth’s motions

    When my heart skips a beat.

    I lay down on the fair

    Weather’s colder than my shivers

    Up on my neck stand those hairs

    Im feeling lighter than feathers

    Unable to hold what’s there

    My body shakes in awry

    No emotions left to spare

    No tears left to cry.

    My feet seem too far from the ground

    Feels like I’m almost on ice

    And when they’ll become numb enough

    I know I’ll perish twice

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    Susan Katz
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    Thank you for sending your poem for consideration for Featured Poem of the Month, for June.  I love your last line!  I truly appreciate you sharing this fine piece of work with me, Susan

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