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    Mansi
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    Everything is fine, sorry was fine.

    Yes, I was selfish, selfish for wanting you fully with me

    May be I wanted to create a diary of Love, Hope and faith

    That wasn’t sudden and obvious , your love just decreased and decreased and vanished… and there wasn’t love but possession and possession.

    I was holding on and on and on.. The misery you gave just ate me half with time..

    My mind says, Let go, heart opposes it!

    Dragging back of what I can never get any more is foolishness

    It’s hard, it’s hell at times.. leaving my person- really hard

    But the FREEDOM AND PEACE is what I needed and that was only after letting go!

    And about happiness yes, it’s on the way.. !

     

    The night, I withstood the whole night supporting and hoping for, but wakeup darling! It’s morning I won’t be there..

    Suffering is very privated and painful, face it, it’s time.

                                       MANSI:)

     

    #18393
    Susan Katz
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    Thank you so much for sharing this very emotional, very real-life poem with me.  I will add it to the poems I am considering for Featured Poem of the Month, for June.  Your poem tells me that you feel things deeply and that is a required trait for a poet.  Again, Mansi, thank you for sharing and keep on writing, Susan

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