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    Captured.0519
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    Let me think
    About the last person
    On the face of the earth
    Would he be the captain
    Or the begger left behind

    Let me think
    About the poetry
    That has shook my soul
    Did it break my illusion
    Or gave the inoculum for thought

    Let me think
    About the dreams
    I watched everyday with naked eyes
    Did it consume me
    Or is just another delusion

    Let me think
    About the marrow of life
    Which asks me to live
    Is just an anatomical thing
    Or it has greater purpose

    Let me think
    About the laughs
    Which bring memories
    Are they really exist there
    Or just some candid visual in long term storage

    Let me think
    About everything and nothing
    Because words and ideas
    Are only reality
    To live a life and to really live it

     
    #18222
    Susan Katz
    Keymaster

    Thank you so much for submitting your poem for consideration for Featured Poem of the Week.  There is a lot going on in this poem, from your questions and answers, to the “clipped” tone of the poem which encourages us to move from one line to the next.  I really liked the question/answer style of your poem, which challenges us to address those questions for ourselves.  Poetry should engage the reader, and you’ve done a very good job with that.  Have a very creative day, Susan

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