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    Riya Jaiswal
    Participant

    I’m out of 

    lanterns   looking for 

    myself 

     

    for

    I can’t look

    into what’s

    to be seen

     

    you see?

     

    or you don’t 

    it unfolds

    regardless 

    into stories  you recite 

     

    rewriting 

    overwriting 

    fighting 

     

    for 

    which lighthouse 

    searches itself

    beyond  misty waves?

    #18884
    Susan Katz
    Keymaster

    Thank you for sharing your lovely poem.  I find clarity, intent, and creative, meaningful and impactful use of imagery.  Very much enjoyed reading it.

     

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