Matters ~ Ash (Edited)

[Aya_pieceofme]

A whisper I hear even when by myself

Loud as the howling winds within the rocky caves

Mind unstill unclear as the murky seas

With true, false, and the rest.

[Susan Katz]

Well done – and thank you for the work you put in to bring this short poem to a more impactful, meaningful, and poetic conclusion.  I will definitely be considering your poem as one to be featured on a future (next two weeks) poetladykatz Instagram page post.  Thank you for your efforts and for letting me be a part of the process of taking words and crafting them into poems.  Nicely done!  – Susan

[Aya_pieceofme]

Thank you ~ Ash

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