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    The_crumbled_dairy
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    I come to you when I’m in pain

    You never let that go in vain….

    I remember you when I feel lost

    you never let that last so long….

    I send a text saying I’m sorry

    You send a reply that takes of that story….

    I dial your number to deal with myself

    You join up and deal directly with myself….

    I say to you that I hate myself 

    You make me love me by all yourself

    I say to you that you are the best 

    You gave to me all your best….

    I say I owe you for all your love

    You say you love me for all your life….

    You brought up the best inside of me 

    By being the best in front of me….

    You make me feel so so great 

    That vanishes off all my pain….

    And that’s how I realized that you are my AMIGO!!! 

     

    #18423
    Susan Katz
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    Thank you for sharing this very intimate and very loving poem with me.  How wonderful to have someone in your life who makes you feel better about yourself.  I was very taken by the line “You make me love me by all of yourself.”  What more would anyone want from a relationship than someone who helps us love ourselves!  – Susan

    #18427
    The_crumbled_dairy
    Participant

    Thank you so much sir…..

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