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    Shelley_001
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    Hello!

     Here is my poem “Our Last Meeting”; sending it for consideration for the featured poem of the week.

    OUR LAST MEETING

    Love was not a great thing for me,
    Loving you was not a choice,
    It didn’t commence,
    It didn’t proceed,
    It didn’t happen,
    It wasn’t a love story,
    It wasn’t him or her,
    It wasn’t them,
    Wasn’t that place,
    Wasn’t that day, that hour,
    Could be me, my body, my heart, or could not be this too.
    Intimacies, rather making love,
    Making a day, a night,
    Needed no desires, no moans, no sighs, no breaths, and no movements.
    Like.., just like my amoebic drawings of childhood.
    They all did that, I also wanted to,
    Or maybe I did not.
    A robe, a bucket, a hair, a bag, a grain of sand, some sea shells,
    All blue-white-pink-grey-orange-any colour all,
    A thoughtless and emotional looking “really really nice”
    But last time, I thought of tearing you off.
    Gripping you head with my feet and, tearing off the flaps,
    I did, as I always did, I manhandled with care (myself),
    Tore everything off; seeing how human blood looks, how it runs;

    I don’t have a love story here for YOU.
    Love isn’t a great thing, for nobody does it.

    -Shelley

     

     

     

     

     

    #18197
    Susan Katz
    Keymaster

    What a very powerful and “passionately” written poem.  It is filled with emotion and imagery and, in its own way, is stark and striking  I am grateful to consider it for Featured Poem of the Week.  I have received so many wonderfully written poems, it will be very hard choosing one to feature.  I thank you for being a part of Poet Lady Katz and hope to read more of your work in the weeks to come.  Have a very fine day, Susan

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