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    Shiby
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    The sun n the moon, & their forbidden love.
    that’s what Poets talk about
    But no one ever noticed “A lover”.
    “The clouds”
    When She’s missing her beau, the Sun.
    Shattered and wandering alone.
    He’s someone who stays selfless in love, Forever
    He (cloud) cuddles her
    & trys to make her feel loved again
    But he finds the moon, cold & lost again
    But still ..he stays with her.

    Throughout that dark and lonely night.

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    Susan Katz
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    Thank you so much for sharing your poem, about the nature of love, with me.  I was touched by how you managed to create a sense of reality in the relationship between the sun and moon and the sun and the clouds.  You must be a very good observer of nature and the drifting of day into night, and night into day.  I appreciate your sending in your poem and will add it to those I am considering for Featured Poem of the Month for June.  – Susan

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