Very loving and very nicely done. You have a light and appealing rhythm to your poem and certainly, a great deal of emotion. May I suggest a couple of things that are grammatically incorrect – ” show” should be “shows” – and “throw” should be “throws” – and you might want to add the word “and” between Spring – Fall. I think this is a very well thought-out and well-written poem – beautiful imagery. I do very much like “the dawn show…” and your ending. Your friend in poetry, Susan
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