Sufi

[Smrita Chaudhury]

Softly sprinkled changes

unfolded seven stages

stages of Sufi love

pyramid of truelove.

 

Pyramid of truelove

pyramid thereof

spells of attraction

threaded attachment.

 

Threaded attachment

with endless passion

calmed speechless lust

with timeless trust.

 

With timeless trust

with sprinkled gold dust

madness and worship

laced the relationship. 

 

Laced the relationship

with lost bargaining chip

left you and I out of breath

lily-livered at Sufis’ death. 

 

Lily-livered at Sufis’ death

destiny whistled a breath

cheerful cupid angels 

softly sprinkled changes.

[Susan Katz]

Thank you so very much for sharing your very lyrical and poetically conceived poem with me.  I very much like the way you bring your ideas together, using poetic techniques that emphasize, not only the words themselves, but the sounds of the words – giving your poem a rhythmic and musical quality.  There is real intensity to be felt in your words, thoughts, and ideas.  I will add your poem to the many others I am considering for Featured Poem of the Month for July.  Thank you for your interest in poetladykatz.com  – Susan

[Smrita Chaudhury]

Thank you for your kind words and I feel encouraged to carry on with my pursuit in poetry. Have a good week ahead.

[Susan Katz]

It's my pleasure. I look forward to reading more of your work, in the future. Wishing you good health and a very happy day, Susan

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