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    kritishpalrecha
    Participant

    Let the blowing winds 

    know about your day.

     

    Let the moisture of

    your sadness join

    the moving

    clouds.

     

    Let the whiteness

    of the moon calm

    your soul.

     

    Let that curve

    widen on your

    cheek.

     

    Let your lids block

    your Iris.

    Let your thumping

    heart rest.

     

    And then jump into

    this dark ocean of

    dreams and

    mindfulness.

     

    #18273
    Susan Katz
    Keymaster

    Thank you very much for submitting your poem for consideration for Featured Poem of the Week.  This gentle, lyrical poem is very well written and, like a soft breeze, takes us on a journey into imagery and emotion.  I appreciate your sharing it with me, Susan

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