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  • #17595
    Anshul
    Participant

    Hi Susan 

    I have seen an advertisement of your website on Instagram and I liked it a lot. So, I wanted to share one of my poems with you.

    Hope you’ll like it.

    It’s called the 66th Street 

     

    Have I told you about the 66th street

    Where the birds sing

    and the tree gossip 

     

    On the 66th street the

    Aunties mingle under the tree shade

    and the kids play in the noon

    But sometimes in a rare purple nightfall

    I have seen two love birds meet

     

    The moon was a flower

    Which was releasing its scent

    that was surrounding the perfect meeting

     

    You should visit the 66th street

    maybe you can come across

    the giant flower

    the purple nightfall

    or could hear the trees

    and maybe, just maybe

    You might see the perfect meeting!

     

     

    #18166
    Susan Katz
    Keymaster

    Thanks so much for submitting your poem for consideration to be featured in the Featured Poem of the Week, next week on my site.  This is a fine poem, filled with feeling and lovely images.  Thank you for submitting and I do hope you have a lovely day.  – Susan

    #18213
    Susan Katz
    Keymaster

    Anshul – I just wanted to let you know that I chose your poem to be the Featured Poem of the Week. I explained why, and published your poem, in my newsletter. Congratulations. Your poem is gentle and touching and uses beautiful imagery to create a lovely memory and a stunning word picture. Keep on writing – look forward to seeing more of your work, Susan

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