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    diyatesla
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    ” THE BLUE “

    “I am part of a divine plan”

    Said my folks,

    But I wanted to dive out,

    Out of the plan and into the Blue

    And so I did,

    I dived into the magnificent Blue,

    It felt cool,

    I held by breath and opened my eyes

    I saw it,

    Endless water everywhere .

    I pushed my hands

    My leg, my feet,

    No one around 

    Just me and the Blue water.

     

    Then it struck me 

    The icy truth

    Many dived, into the deceitful Blue

    No one came out, not one soul.

     

    I looked down 

    Saw nothing, nothing

    But dark, cold and bitter

    No longer, could I hold my breath

    My heart raced, at three hundred

    Blue weighed me down 

    As I tried pulling out.

     

    I heard voices,

    Somewhere distant:

    “Run dear, while you can

    Never seize, to turn around

    The Blue’ll seduce you

    And that’s how you’ll lose you.”

     

    I pushed my hands, 

    Couldn’t move an inch

    Intoxicated, by the Blue

    My heart raced no more

    My lung wanted to give out

    Pulled into the gravity

    Down I went.

     

    I saw a glimpse, over my head

    A ray of sunshine,

    A hand of hope.

    I reached out

    And felt warmth

    I felt at peace

    No longer intoxicated

    And out of the Blue.

    Blue never got it, my soul or my heart

    I am part of a divine plan

    It was bliss indeed, at last. 

     

     

     

    – Diya Tesla Thomas

     

     

     

     

     

     

    #18239
    Susan Katz
    Keymaster

    Thank you for sharing your meaningful poem with me.  And, of course, for submitting it to be considered for Featured Poem of the Week.  Your poem has a lovely flow to it (like the water) and certainly is emotional and dramatic.  I wish you a very happy and creative day, Susan

    #18243
    diyatesla
    Participant

    Thank u mam😄

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