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    JALA
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    The sky connects us, the mountains they

    veil,

    that which fills my heart, and my tongue seldom

    reveals;

    but nature is an ally, in all its forms, as it

    produces-

    the bird-chirrups, the summer-bees spell my heart’s

    music.

     

    So, lass! listen keen, midst their buzz, betwixt their

    flaps,

    or even in the trembling leaves, passing breeze you can

    grasp-

    in what two birds, they converse, sitting on a bright

    perch

    you will find there, the words for my hearty

    touch.

     

    So, lass! close thine eyes, and come closer, they will

    whisper,

    for the tongue of nature is, than a man’s, much

    crisper;

    so, the subject that fills my heart, and my tongue seldom

    reveals

    is contained in this sky, in these mountain-slopes that

    veil.

    #18337
    Susan Katz
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    Lovely poem – with a classical feel to it.  Your language and syntax, all suggest you are a fan (and scholar) of classic poetry.  Thank you so much for sharing and for submitting your poem for consideration for Featured Poem of the Month. – Susan

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