I am a little confused by the meaning of the poem. “Upto” is not a word in English – and grammatically, “it’s paves a way with secret away…” has no meaning that I can grasp. “Pens on paper culminate (in) wizardry”is nice, and “nature’s rhythm on my soul…” is nice, but I’m not sure how the word “shower” fits in. I think you have some good moments and a real feel for poetry. It may just be, a translation from one language into another, issue. I am very happy you chose to share your poem with me and hope my comments have been helpful. Your friend in poetry, Susan
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