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    Aditya verma
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    The one who wanted to attain supremacy ;

    The one who wanted revenge ;

    The one who bled for their family ;

    The one who took their first step ;

    The one who are on their death bed ;

    The one who started a war and the one who will end it ;

    Are now United together in this strange catastrophe and shall attain universal brotherhood.

     

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    Susan Katz
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    Thank you for submitting your poem for consideration for Featured Poem of the Week.  There is power in the simplicity of this poem – the repetition – the joining together of all those “who wanted- who bled – who took – who are on their death bed – who started a war” and giving them a sort of equality.  The truth of tragedy – it brings us all to our knees and unites us.  Well done.  Wishing you a very creative and happy day, Susan

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