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    Umm
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    Strange how strangers Become our greatest changers

    Listening once made me want to listen forever.

    That a new name in my phone would matter this much,

    I would have thought never.

     

    For the laughter he brought, I missed him even when he was around.

    The world seems colourless, before his eyes they’re lovely brown.

     

    He made me want to talk, he heard what I never said.

    He smiled at me in ways I cannot forget.

     

    I sit texting him in the same place where I first thought about him. Against this joyless distance, I am still hoping.

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    Susan Katz
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    Thank you for submitting your poem for consideration for Featured Poem of the Month, for June.  Your poem has a quiet, compelling element to it and I was drawn in to your story,  Some very lovely “poetic” moments.  Thank you so much for sharing it with me, Susan

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