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    Anushka_15
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    “You’re beautiful”

    I say as the moonlight softly caresses

    Your face

    As your cheekbones widen slowly 

    And a soft smile appears on your lips. 

     

    I feel my heart break and heal synchronously

    The world around me hushes down

    And it’s just you in my sight

    The floor beneath me feels as if it’s spinning 

    And my head matching it with all its might. 

     

    “You’re mine”

    I whisper softly, 

    You crouch down a little

    And whisper back against my lips

    “And I always will be”

    I watch my reflection in your ocean eyes

    Watching myself drown with every second you exist by my side. 

     

    Our fingers intertwined together

    I know we both are dying

    As our heartbeats once again synch with each other. 

     

    I blink once, I blink twice

    And watch as your hue fades away

    In the wind

    Just like every night. 

    #18232
    Susan Katz
    Keymaster

    Thank you so much for sharing your poem with me and for consideration as Featured Poem of the Week.  I loved this line in particular “I watch my reflection in your ocean eyes” – beautiful and meaningful imagery – and, you have many moments in the poem that rise to that level.  I wish you a lovely and creative day, Susan

    #18249
    Anushka_15
    Participant

    Thank you so much! Looking forward to learning from you❤

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