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    suchitralata
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    days rush by

    faded polaroid sky

    drops down all dry

    only to turn glint white

    cover up the mistakes

    of our piled up history

    how many seasons

    shall dust our hearts

    will we try

    to see spring tender eyes

    furled beneath bright

    laden branches

    sparse yet strong

    rooted and tall

    promise dreamt right

    deep summer comes true

    as a kite’s flight

    past telephone lines of despair

    and autumn’s siren call

     

    heal white winter sigh

    treat me to sight

    sweet white winter sigh

    take me to light

    #18706
    Susan Katz
    Keymaster

    This poem is definitely a Suchitra poem.  It has your voice, identifiable, and that’s a wonderful thing to have, as a poet.  This is a strong and beautifully written poem.  Some great lines – “how many seasons/ shall dust our hearts” – “past telephone lines of despair.”  I may have to start calling it “The Suchitra Lata Featured Poem of the Month” page.  However, perhaps we will post this poem next week as poem of the week.  I am planning some big changes on the site, in 2022.  I am hoping to make it more interactive and more accessible.  I am so glad, you found your way to it and share you beautiful (and powerful) poetry with me.  In admiration, Susan

    #18713
    agooddaytoflourish
    Participant

    This is such a beautiful poem, thank you for sharing! Sending love and light.
    – Pam 🙂

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