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  • in reply to: The one starry night #18263
    Bhanu Prakash
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    Hello Susan,
    Thank you for your valuable feedback. This one was supposed to be just an introduction. I didn't know I was supposed to send it fully. I sent the full poem again through the chat room.

    in reply to: The one starry night #18262
    Bhanu Prakash
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    This is my first poem titled, ‘The one starry night’. It explores the world of night’s charm and healing. The earlier one was just an introduction to the poem. Here is the full poem.

     

    THE ONE STARRY NIGHT

    The night sky is black, yet shinning,

    Manifesting and channelizing unstinted aberration,

    Her beauty emanates the souls’ distressing,

    By exhibiting all the facets of self-revelation,

     

    She has her ways and means, through plain dealings,

    And ensures you are caressed in her charms,

    While it becomes elusive to helm those feelings,

    The feelings that shaped you in her invisible arms.

     

    I can hear the soul of night sky, it cheers and rhymes,

    If you are fettered in a difficult situation,

    Look above you, in the darkest of the times,

    The night sky ushers relaxation,

    Letting you hear her soothing chimes,

    That changes your imagination.

     

    The night is dark, not its stark,

    It is clean in its essence, sharing your plight,

    Enjoy and pleasure in its park,

    All you need to do is, give yourself to one starry night.

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