[Writerin_closet]

Thank you for patiently reading through my poem again…tried to update to what you said

Disdain me but
Behind the curtain
I look
Not as puppet master
But Concerned you loathe
I cheer behind curtain
With all my adoration
My life resides in you

[Writerin_closet]

Thank you for reading, from melancholy I meant sadness, context is based upon an orthodox idea.Thank you.

[Writerin_closet]

Mam, I understand , I was engrossed in imagery so I wrote the whole scene like a story, poem is imagery but in few words…
I will work on it, hopefully get better, using all resources at my disposal.
Thank you for nudging me in right direction.😊
I will make changes and get back to you.

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