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an angel and her embroidery (1 reply)

Riya Jaiswal
2 years ago
Riya Jaiswal 2 years ago

My grandma always sang me to sleep

 

    "there lived an angel in the cerulean sky

     wove sapphire yarns embroidered with

     lilac, pink and crimson fleece

     people called it sunset

 

     sometimes she blotted them grey

     her tears kissed the earth

     leaving behind her scent and bow

     people called it rain

 

     every dawn, birds twittered her a visit 

     rooster hailed cock-a-doodle-doo

     so merrily she embroidered them golden

     breathed tender breeze swaying trees

     people called it sunrise"

 

one night my grandma sang herself to sleep

her woven neverland forever lost

until I became a grandma and sang

 

       "there lived an angel in the cerulean sky

       embroidered with silver and multitudes 

       of orbs tucked in constellations

       people called it night sky..."

 

 

Susan Katz
2 years ago
Susan Katz 2 years ago

I really like this poem.  I like the message.  I like the way you "spin" your story through a series of beautifully crafted images: "...

sometimes she blotted them grey

her tears kissed the earth

leaving behind her scent and bow

people called it rain..."

Each of your images works and creates a beautiful "picture" for us, a lovely reality that we can connect with (sunset, rain, sunrise, night sky) - well done.  I would like to feature this poem in my "Poem of the Week" section, in about three weeks.  Let me know if that would work for you.  I have been working on a poem and newsletter that deals with "The People I Love" - and I think this poem would fit beautifully into that theme.

Thank you so much for sharing this lovely poem with me,

Susan

 

 

 

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