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Broken Friendship (2 replies and 3 comments)

Prem Damania
4 years ago
Prem Damania 4 years ago

We said it was forever - said we'd never part,

I knew it was a line, but I still gave both of you my heart.

 

Said you would stay, promised you could.

You chose to walk away, I knew you would.

 

You're not there anymore, my dearest friends.

I hate to say this, but it is our end.

 

By day you're one person, by night another.

Neither of them have anything to do with each other.

 

I sit here and cry for you - not for me,

What you've become, I wish you could see.

 

In your life you make friends that you're sure are true,

Nothing else matters, except what's between them and you.

 

You don't know if anyone has ever before felt this way,

For them you took breaths; you wanted to be alive every day.

 

It hurts to lose a friend; it gives you the saddest frown,

And when a second one bails, it's like getting kicked while you're down.

 

And it hurts to be accused of something you didn't do

You guys should know better than anyone that I would never even think to.

 

You planted a knife in my back.

You were my life, but now, my memories of you are completely black.

 

I am afraid to love another, but I know I shouldn't be,

Because the people in my life are perfect for me.

 

There is this game I play,

Where I close my eyes and fade away.

 

I can't believe it's true,

but in this place, I can't even remember that I loved you.

 

You can't that's already done

 

 

Susan Katz
4 years ago
Susan Katz 4 years ago

Thank you for submitting your poem for consideration for Featured Poem.  Such strong emotions, so powerfully stated make us feel your message.  I thank so much for sharing, Susan

Prem Damania
4 years ago

Thank you for giving me this platform

Susan Katz
4 years ago

You are most welcome! We poets must support one another. Have a very lovely day and stay safe and well, Susan

Tarunsunny5
4 years ago

Happy and proud
That I had no feelings today
No random waves of sadness
But iam still awake
I wish we had a talk
Atleat a last goodbye?
Before leaving our mental states.
U sent through your mind
Did u feel my heart?
It was my mistake, I've done so wrong.
Helping you in tests
And gifting your own picture
I had no feelings for you
Until we fought for that chocolate
We used nicknames
We exchanged our numbers
I miss back those old days
But we grew so old
We had a promise
That u broke in the quite evening
It's done so cool
We never looked at our faces.

Bella
4 years ago
Bella 4 years ago

It’s such a beautiful and heart touching piece. You have expressed your story so exquisitely. Wow!

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