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CANVAS- THE SEA OF EMOTIONS. ~ Chirag Bothra (1 reply)

chiragbothra
3 years ago
chiragbothra 3 years ago

Stepping into a new canvas,
Looking for the few colours.
Each seemed to be different,
Some friendly, some arrogant.

Was looking for several gubbins,
For I wanted to portray.
Perhaps, was there only one,
Who promised to stay.

With the blend of colours,
I started up to fill my canvas.
Hands flew with much ease,
For, I longed for masterpiece.

Yet many arts awaited me,
But I wished to drown in that sea.
The sea of our relation,
The sea of that masterpiece. 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 
Susan Katz
3 years ago
Susan Katz 3 years ago

Thank you for sharing your poem with me.  I love the concept of colors on a canvas representing different emotions.  I like the emotional commitment and, while a bit confused, I do like how, in the end, the poem becomes about a relationship.  I think you need to make that clearer somehow,  I will add your poem to those I am considering for Featured Poem of the Month for July and thank you again for submitting it.  - Susan

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