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FINE LINE (1 reply and 1 comment)

Alina sadh
4 years ago
Alina sadh 4 years ago

I am a part of your unforgettable memory,

Waiting for someone to pave the way is time in vein,

Be your own knight in shining armour to get away.

Most senseless things starts to make sense when in love,

Loosing it takes all the sense away as it was never the one .

Everything sounds like a melody when in love

It hurts when the melody itself could not be heard.

Sooth like northern lights,

Without it even the yellow light makes us cry.

Darkest nights seems star lit with one’s presence ,

Makes it difficult to see the brightest moon when one flees.

Makes rainbow appear even in the worst of storm,

Leaves with the fear of even the lightest gust .

It provides the fun one gets in bookclub,

When leaves takes the fond of books and the club.

Loving someone is easy ,than getting loved

Before loving someone love yourself first.

Beauty Lies in the  eyes of beholder,

Leaves us empty even to look that way.

As leisurely it feels,

It makes you bleed.

It feels like spring when it hits,

And leaves us colder like winter breeze.

It comes faster ,than it can leave

It’s all gloomy in the start,

gets grey when it blows.

It’s not something to be concurred ,

It is to be felt.

It hurts to face the reality,

Thats why Imaginations are all we want to believe in.

With time it all starts to struck,

That you were the only one who ever loved,

Difference is almost next to none.

Susan Katz
4 years ago
Susan Katz 4 years ago

Thank you for submitting your very heartfelt poem for consideration as Featured Poem of the Week.  I hope you have a very lovely and very creative day, Susan

Bagath Manish
4 years ago

Oh this is good, you really seem to have a style in your prose, but please do try to avoid the cliched format and various cliched comparison!

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